My WIP’s Fourth Revision – Getting My Scene Types Right (2)


My WIP’s Fourth Revision

Dramatic Scenes

I finished reworking Action, Contemplation and Dialog Scenes.

go to leekah 1I’m back, later than I expected.


I fell out off our roof and cracked ribs.  But don’t worry…it only hurts when I laugh…or cough.  And I have a cough, too.  But pain meds are wonnnnnnderrrrrrrrfulllllll.  Ha.

I didn’t get as much done as I’d expected, but I did revise my Dramatic Scenes.  And I’m almost afraid to look at what I did write.  Yikes.

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My WIP’s Fourth Revision – Getting My Scene Types Right (1)


My WIP’s Fourth Revision

Action, Contemplation and Dialog Scenes

I finished reshaping character arcs.

go to leekah 1My major character arcs do what I think I want them to do.  I wrote to a purpose, sometimes creating something I’d not written before.  Only time will tell whether my new version is better than my old.

Now I’m on to more writerly stuff.  Specifically, I’m trying to make my scenes do what I want them to do.

But…what does that mean?

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