Chelson’s Bridge – Second Revision Complete


Second Revision of Chelson’s Bridge

Fixing Scene Structure

Read about my first revision.

Second revision…done…four days.


What’s a second revision?

Great question. With our first draft we captured our tale, and the first revision corrected story structure and plot line problems.

The second addresses scene structure.

Again…what does that mean?

Readers understand all scenes aren’t identical. Car chase scenes have a different feel from Hitchcock’s suspense scenes. It’s easy to conjure other examples…or get her book. And I applied Jordan Rosenfeld’s teachings from Make A Scene, picking and choosing from her ten scene types.

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Chelson’s Bridge – First Revision Complete


First Revision of Chelson’s Bridge

Fixing Story Structure and Plot Lines

Read about my reaction to the first draft.

First revision…done…in nine days.

And, you know you are done…how?

Because, after taking 126 comments from my First Read, sorting them into piles — Rev 1 story structure and continuity (109), Rev 2 scene structure (15), Rev 3 character arcs (1), and edit issues (1), I addressed all Rev 1 item, leaving nothing to do.

Ready for the world?

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And…300 dpi Cover Art for an Unpublished WIP


And…300 dpi Cover Art for an Unpublished WIP

Read about my MC’s avatar in my current WIP.


An awful word.

But, using features I discovered with my clunky Photo Shop knockoff, I created a cover page for my maybe finished WIP, Moccasins on a Marble Stair.  And I had fun.

And, while I’m not working on Beyond the Footlights, a message for Moccasins came clearly into focus.  One day, after getting my fill of the novelette series, I will return to it.


Art For Beyond The Footlights


Beyond The Footlights

Main Character

Read about amateur adventures in converting avatars.

I couldn’t stand it anymore.

The not knowing what my Main Character looked like part.

And I couldn’t go on. That has precious little to do with revising my first draft. But, as happens with revisions, I’ve experienced any number of micro revelations. My starting scene begins with my MC performing on stage. And theatrical themes might glue this story together. In time, a working title popped out…Beyond The Floodlights. With all that going, my MC’s artwork caught me by surprise.

So, he struts his stuff, commanding our attention…cock of the walk.

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Updating My Drawings – From 72 dpi to 300 dpi


Updating My Drawings

Going From 72 dpi to 300 dpi

So…how’s my novelette going, you ask?


…I got sidetracked into cover art. While waiting two weeks to read my first draft, I joined a group on Scrib studying cover design, and learned I suffered from…blurry image.

Rocked to the core, I decided to experiment with a recently added image. Uncertain of the outcome, I redrew it with 300 dpi’s.

And wonder of wonders. I had room for details…maybe too many…but lots of fun.

Then, in my clunky Photoshop knockoff, I discovered shading, and added it. The image needs work, but can wait.

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Cover Art, Pixels, and Swirling Heads


Cover Art, Pixels, and Swirling Heads

Cover art.


On Scrib, one of the groups began discussing Cover design. With time on my hands waiting for two weeks before reading The Bridge at Chelson Gorge, I joined. Unlike some who have vast experience, I’ve very little, mostly garnered by toying with covers for my first WIP.

They began with cover art. The takeaway? Get a big picture with high a resolution, because it must pass two tests…a compelling thumb-nail image, and a killer full-sized image.

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