Trusted Reader Confusion Dispelled
Well…I finished the Second Revision…again.
If that sounds familiar, it’s because I announced the same thing a week ago.
Then Trusted Reader comments ruined everything. To bad…so sad.
Four confusing things. But how did they apply to my story. So, I dug deeper. Between her thoughts and my suspicions, I found 55 changes in 16 of 18 scenes.
But I couldn’t deny several underlying scene structure problems. One action scene used too much front-end material. The solution? Rewrite the scene without the front-end material and save it for a rainy day…which came the next day in a new scene which established another scene.